Student ID: 07157
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Portfolio for Writing III,
Section 1a [or] 1c
(See: Note 1, below)
Section 1a [or] 1c
(See: Note 1, below)
0.0. Overview
Reviews, Posts, Words, and More
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(See: Note 2, below.)
1.0. Essays
(See: Note 3, below[.]) | 1.1. Showcase | Short titles [+ links] | Dates (yyyy.mm.dd) | ¶ | W | C | L | P | M |
| Self-introduction 08.04.20 (250 words) | Essays 1-01: Weeeeey! The Letter for Host Family and Self Introduction | 2008.04.09 | 7 | 376 | 1 | 1 | 0 | |
| Movie review 08.05.04 (300 words) | Essays 1-02: MR 1-01 "SHReK" | 2008.05.04 | 5 | 653 | 0 | 2 | 1 | |
| University life 08.05.18 | Essays 1-03 ♥ My University Life ~Active and Exciting~ ♥ | 2008.05.16 | 5 | 434 | 10 | 3 | 1 | |
| Another review 08.06.01 | Essays 1-04: ❤Sightseeing～the Udo Shrine～Our Wishes Come True❤ | 2008.06.01 | 6 | 609 | 8 | 5 | 4 | |
| Language learning history 08.06.15 | Essays 1-05: Now is to Be a Global Woman!!!~From the Beginning of My Mother Language to My Learning Languages for 19 Years~ | 2008.06.15 | 8 | 941 | 1 | 4 | 1 | |
| 6th essay (Slideshow) 2008.07.06 | Essays 1-06: Self Introduction | 2008.07.04 | 6 | 1 | 6 | 13 | ||
| Totals | --- | --- | 37 | 3013 | 21 | 21 | 20 |
Key:
¶: number of paragraphs five (5) or more sentences in length
W: number of words
C: number of comments
L: number of links
P: number of photos or other graphics
M: number of other media embedded
M: number of other media embedded
1.2. Best Essay
Selection and Assessment: Which of those essays do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.・I think that the best essay for me is "Sightseeing~the Udo Shrine~Our wishes Come True". I have two reasons for this essay. One is that my friends gave me a lot of comments and I was nominated and got a prize. The other is that I can attach many pictures on this essay and introduce many sightseeing of my hometown. That's why I select this essay the best.
2.0. Comments
Showcase | Titles of posts with links | Dates of comments (yy.mm.dd) | Numbers of words in comments | Qualities of comments** |
| 2.1. Your first comment on your instructor's blog* | About Food and Drink | 08.05.14 | 40 words | good |
| 2.2. Your best comment on a classmate's blog* | Essay-04 My Hometown | 08.06.04 | 27 words | happy! |
| 2.3. Best comment by a classmate on your blog* | Recently... | 08.05.20 | 29 words | good idea |
| 2.4. Most comments on: | Titles of posts with link | Dates of posts (yy.mm.dd) | Total number of words in comments | Qualities of comments*[*] |
| 2.4.1. Any one of your essays* | Essays 1-03 ♥ My University Life ~Active and Exciting~ ♥ | 08.05.21 | 276 words | many questions and great phrases |
| 2.4.1.1. When did you respond to those comments? | --- | 08.05.21 | --- | --- |
| 2.4.1.2. How did you respond to those comments? | --- | --- | 111 words | contained detail and answered one by one |
| 2.4.2. Any of your other posts* | Essays 1-04: ❤Sightseeing～the Udo Shrine～Our Wishes Come True❤ | 08.06.01 | 175 words | cheerful and kind |
| 2.4.2.1. When did you respond to those comments? | --- | 08.06.04 | --- | --- |
| 2.4.2.2. How did you respond to those comments? | --- | --- | 30 words | glad and cheerful |
* Current semester comments on essays and other posts
** Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post. That is, explain what makes them good comments.
2.5. Recent comments display
Does your blog display recent comments from blog visitors in a prominent location, for example in a sidebar, header, or footer widget? Where or why not?- I locate the new comments near the top of my blog because if someone comments me, I can look at it easily. So I can notice them and I can also checkmy g-mail every time.
2.6. Additional reflections on comments
- I think that comments from my friends are very good and interesting because I can communicate with everyone with giving and receiving comments. Besides,I can know my friends more and learn how to express my feeling in easy English.
3.0. Book Reviews
| 3.1. Showcase | Short titles with links | Dates (yy.mm.dd) | Words | Comments |
| Example: | Vampire Killer | 07.05.16 | 39 | 1 |
| 1-01 | Audrey Hepburn Chris Rice | 08.04.18 | 64 | 0 |
| 1-02 | The Christmas Disco | 08.04.22 | 67 | 1 |
| 1-03 | The Carnival | 08.04.23 | 71 | 2 |
| 1-04 | The Barbecue | 08.04.29 | 60 | 0 |
| 1-05 | Juuie B. Jones Is a Beauty Shop Guy | 08.05.14 | 52 | 0 |
| 1-06 | The Chronicles of NARNIA | 08.06.02 | 196 | 0 |
| 1-07 | Pinocchio | 08.06.08 | 222 | 0 |
| 1-08 | Down the Rushing River | 08.06.16 | 225 | 0 |
| 1-09 | The Rat Hunt | 0806.20 | 216 | 0 |
| 1-10 | Elmo says ACHOO! | 08.06.22 | 202 | 0 |
| 1-11 | FLUFFY ~GOES APPLE PICKING~ | 08.06.26 | 183 | 0 |
| 1-12 | More Macdonalds | 08.07.08 | 205 | 0 |
| 1-13 | The Great Escape ~Many Animals~ | 08.07.09 | 228 | 0 |
| --- | --- | TOTALS: | 1991 | 3 |
3.2. Best Book Review
Selection and Assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.・ I think that the best book review for me is "The Chronicles of NARNIA". I have two reasons for this book review. One is that one of my friends recommend me to watch this movie, so I have chance to read this introduction easily. The other is that I could write introduction, brief story, how charactors they are good recommendation easily. That's why I selected this book review.
4.0. Blog Layout, Labeling, Linking, & Media
| Showcase | Yes | No |
| 4.1. Does your blog have an archive? | 〇 | |
| 4.1.1. Does the archive display the titles of posts? | 〇 | |
| 4.1.2. Is the archive organized by month? | 〇 | |
| 4.1.3. Is the archive at or near the top of the sidebar? | 〇 | |
| 4.2. Does your blog have labels displayed in sidebar? | 〇 | |
| 5.2.1. Do your labels include these required labels (typed accurately): | --- | --- |
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| 4.2.2. Does your sidebar display other labels? | 〇 | |
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| 4.3. Links & media | --- | --- |
| 4.3.1. Does your blog include pictures or other graphics? | 〇 | |
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| 4.3.2. Does your blog include posts with multiple links? | 〇 | |
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| 4.3.3. Does your blog include other media? | 〇 | |
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4.4. Overall presentation
What have you done to enhance the overall presentation of your blog? List and explain the three most important content, formatting, layout, or other presentation changes or enhancements that you have made on your blog this semester.- ...Decorate colorful blog: I used many color every time I write to read easily. Besides, I emphasized the important words or phrase to read easily and understand what it is written by using various color or changing font.
- ...Many gadgets: I put a lot of gadgets in my blog sidebar. To set News, TV, Note and Weather, I can get many different information. I also can know about events of many different countries.
- ...Attaching many pictures and containing detail: I attached pictures and added detail contents about these. To attach many pictures encourage us to read. Besides if a lot of pictures on my blog, readers enjoy reading and visiting my blog.
5.0. Additional reflections on your blog writing
- ...I think that writing is important for me to express my feelings freely or keep a diary. But I don't know my writing is good or bad, so I didn't know my mistake for writing skill. If my writing had been correcting, I may have understood my writing mistake.
6.0. Suggestions for your peers and successors
- ...Anyway it is important for us to keep writing anything even if a little things, I guess. Let's enjoy writing! If we attach many different kinds of pictures every time, we can enjoy reading, visiting each blog and commenting for them. We can keep in touch with them.
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Notes:
- This portfolio template derives from the templates for Writing IIIc and Writing IVc portfolios (2007-08).
- Please use the same code in section 0.0 that you used to embed your proto-portfolios in the footer of your blog.
- The essays section (1.0. Essays, above) derives from Proto-Portfolio 2-02 (2008)
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